And today's winner for best proof of writing what you know is:
"She smelled slightly of a damp sock left too long at the bottom of a laundry pile."
Yup! I need to do laundry.*
And in case you were wondering, that is the hero describing the heroine. Not exactly a romantic observation, is it? Hard to believe he actually kisses her less than two paragraphs later. I hope she brushed her teeth!
*To clarify, I don't smell like a damp sock but my bedroom definitely does.
How...sweet.
ReplyDeleteAnd I too know that distinctive odor. It makes me shudder just remembering.